Narrative story idea #4

Ahoy me Bloggers :- Back on the bus - on a tram - the tram from Glenelg to the City - the passenger has a guitar case - looks out of the window - at traffic, at rain, at cars and bright lights. He gets off at Victoria Square and takes out his guitar from the case. He plugs into a little portable amplifier. He spins around and around the centre of the square as the traffic spins around him - camera motion with the traffic and against the traffic - rain, bright lights, traffic, cars. Already have soundtrack.